There has now been a change in the point of view for the book. I did have it in first person point of view and in two halves: :Lizzie then Danny. But my editor has said that as there is repetition in a lot of places, it becomes boring to read. So it has now changed to third person pov eg he said, she did…. And it will be a lot shorter than intended. Once I have finished it, I will let you know how long it is then.